I did a little brainstorming and wrote a short story that I think might be a good basis for a YA novel. Here it is if you'd like to read it.
10:42pm. My phone stopped ringing and the message Mom Missed Call (37) flashed across my lock screen. Why does she keep trying? My phone dinged again. Sophie it is almost 11. Answer your phone! She knew I wasn't going to answer it and that I could not care less about her being mad about it. She had no power over me. I smiled turning back towards my group of friends. There were three of us currently giving our parents heart attacks. We waited for the guard to turn around towards his microwave before we hopped over the fence into the country club. I hit the grass with a thump, the wave of pressure going through my entire body, leaving my head buzzing for a few moments. It smelled like rotting seaweed and murky water, but we kept shopping for our boat. "Would the blue boat to the left or the white one towards the front fulfill your request my ladies?" Jonah asked gesturing like a posh butler. "Why, the blue one of course." I giggled like Audrey Hepburn.
10:58pm. The white leather seat sent chills down my back. I wondered if I would ever be able to afford one of these before I died... probably not. Sophie! If you keep this up you are going to end up just like Liam. Come home. A twinge of pain followed. I couldn't resist answering, How dare you? I shoved my phone back into my pocket. "Honestly, Soph, you should just chuck your phone overboard. It's not like it would change anything." Rose started unpacking her bag as Jonah found the boat's handbook. "How to Hotwire a Boat, by the Boatbuilder's Organization," I said sarcastically. Jonah glared at me.
11:13pm. The salty wind blew in my hair as Jonah drove away from the siren-filled dock. Rose cheered and flipped off the distraught guard. My phone continued buzzing in my back pocket, but these were the memories I would keep forever -- the stories I would tell my kids. Unlike my mother, I was living life.
11:19pm. The sea rocked us back and forth as we stared at the stars, no lights in sight. The Bud Light went down my throat, leaving a bitter taste in my mouth and warming up my stomach. I crunched the can between my hands, threw it overboard, and started guzzling down another one as Rose rambled, "My mouth is sweating." She blew a puff of smoke into my face. I fanned it away - it smelled like skunk and I did not want another headache. The waves started feeling rockier as my mind spun out of control. I stood up, stumbling, catching myself on the damp silver railing. Jonah was behind the steering wheel and wrapping my arm around him. I turned up the radio's volume knob: "This is 102.7 Kiss FM and we're playing another full hour of commercial-free hits!"
12:20am. My phone hadn't vibrated in a while so I pulled it out of my pocket. Something is wrong. Bringing your father to the hosp. "Get off your phone!" Rose lunged towards me and snatched it out of my hands. She began walking near the edge of the boat, like an acrobat balancing on a tightrope. "Stop!" My heart was beating at a thousand miles per hour: I felt sobered up. Rushing to her, my body felt lazy and heavy. I rocked as I tried to get closer to her. Rose held my phone out over the side of the boat. I reach for it. I plunge.
12:11am. I splash my arms back and forth trying to get closer to the surface of the water, but my body doesn't cooperate. Seawater passes through my nose, burning my lungs and making me nauseated. I come up for a few seconds and take the deepest breath possible. "Sophie! Sophie!" I see Rose screaming as Jonah runs up behind her. My heart pounds in my chest as I think all my thoughts at once, in firework flashes. I begin to sink, watching the light of the moon get smaller and smaller. I continue to thrash my arms, refusing to give up, until everything goes black.
12:15am. My eyes shoot open. Everything around me is dark. Shadows dance around me as I stand surrounded by a humming noise. "Hello?" I call out. I begin walking aimlessly. My body feels heavy and the feeling of someone sitting on my chest overwhelms me. "What is this place?" I shriek this time. "What is happening to me?" I'm starting to lose my breath. Behind me, the hum becomes louder. My head pounds in return. I try to whip my body around, but it is sluggish and slow. "Who's there?" A shadow grows bigger, approaching me with no intention of stopping. I shut my eyes, unable to move, preparing to be hit. Then, nothing happens; the shadow simply glides through me. The pressure increases on my chest. Where am I?
12:16am. I have been following a shadow for what feels like an eternity. The hum continues and the suffocating sensation grows. As I place one foot in front of the other, the flat ground slopes downward. The temperature cools, but it burns my body. It feels as though dry ice is being help up against every inch of my body, making my skin melt and my bones freeze.
12:18am. As the floor flattens again, the sensations hitting my body are unbearable. I try to let out a scream, but with weight on my lungs, short breaths are the most I can handle. Looking over the shadows in front of me, all I can see is a dead end.
12:19am. The shadows have disappeared and one again, I find myself alone. I stretch my arms out to my sides, trying to find a wall to guide me. Nothing. I stick my arms in front of me, reaching forward. I feel knives slice my hands as I touch the wall. I pull away. The humming gets louder, the smothering increases, and the freezing burning becomes intolerable. I throw my body onto the placard ahead of me and it turns, revealing a clearing.
12:20am. I cross the opening and collapse. Everything has stopped except for the soreness in my lungs. I begin to weep, exhausted and afraid. "Sophie?" I raise my head, too tired to pull my body up. "Sophie? What are you doing here?" My brother comes to me and cradles my body. "Liam?" I whisper, startled. "What? Where? How?" He shushes me. Last time I saw him, bits of machine were sprinkled on the road, my mother was wailing, and a white sheet covered his drug-infested body. "Am I dead?" My voice cracks when I look up at him. He shakes his head. I examine his face. He looks healthier and definitely stronger. Most shocking, though, is that his forehead isn't creased with anger and his eyes aren't filled with hate. He looks peaceful and calm. I sit up so that I am face-to-face with him. "What is happening?"
12:22am. Every few seconds I feel a push on my chest. Liam starts to explain that I am in limbo, and the road to Hell is ahead. "All that pain you experienced is nothing compared to what happens down there. Your worst fears haunt you and you relive your mistakes daily." I am still in shock. "Then why do you look so calm?" I ask. "You learn to fix yours wrongs, and forgive. You help people." I nod. I have always looked up to him as my hero, and I can't believe this was where he has ended up. "Sophie, what is wrong with you? Didn't you learn from me? You are dying. Mom--" I scoff. "Oh come on!" I try to stand, but gravity has multiplied and I am stuck. "You can't leave until you die or come back to life, so answer my questions." Liam's tone has completely changed. I explain everything to him, how Mom has become cold and distant since he died and how my mind is always chaos. He looks hurt. "I understand what you're saying, but it doesn't give you an excuse to act this way. Breaking the rules, breaking the law, walking all over people who are there for you -- throwing away your future. You're better than this." The entirety of what Liam says is true, but changing isn't an option.
12:24am. I am pretty sure I am going to die at this point. Liam and I have been talking for hours. I have broken down as the rhythmic pushes on my chest continue. "You have to change. This is your last chance," Liam begs. "How?" It is such a simple question, yet I can't seem to answer it for myself. "How am I supposed to change? I love my friends, my experiences.... all of it." He looks at me warmly. "Sophie, you can keep your friends, you just have to adjust your attitude. You cannot run around all night worrying Mom and Dad. It isn't fair to them. Don't you remember what happened to them with me? It broke them." I nodded, picturing Mom staying in bed, not eating, for days after the accident. Dad going on drives for hours, only to come back with bloodied knuckles, probably from hitting a wall or the steering wheel. Throughout the past few years, I haven't realized that history might be replaying for them. I smile at Liam, he hugs me, and the pressure on my lungs vanishes.
12:25am. "Sophie! Sophie!" Rose shrieked towards the sky. As I coughed, my throat burned from the salt water. I tried opening my eyes, but I was too weak and my body ached as I was lifted into a sitting position. "Oh my God." Rose wrapped her arms around me while someone else, Jonah I suspected, poured water into my mouth. It felt refreshing, coating my throat with cold. Through my eyelids, I saw flashing lights. I heard someone yelling, "Everything is going to be okay, Sophie." Rose didn't let me go; I could feel her wet cheek against my forehead. My eyes still closed and my body drained, I began losing consciousness.
6:23am. The beeping of the machines surrounds me and I feel tangled in the numerous wires attached to me. I flutter my eyes open and someone squeezes my left hand. At first everything is blurry, but soon enough my vision clears and I see an empty room. "Mom?" I gasp. The grip on my left hand tightens. She shushes me and tells me to rest. I turn to her and she managed to smile. "Dad?" I pause for a second. "He's okay. Just kidney stones, nothing lethal." I nod, thankful. "Mom, I am so sorry." My voice cracks. "For everything." Her expression warms. "I love you," I say. "I love you too," she says. Then I feel myself drift off again.
10:04am. I wake to the door opening and a waft of perfume entering the room. "Hey Soph, How are you feeling?" I nod, but see that my mom is gone and get nervous. "She just ran home to take a shower and grab some clothes." Rose smiles, a tear streaming down her face. "Don't cry," I manage to gasp. "You died, Soph. Your heart..." She covers her mouth, trying to control her emotions. "Your heart stopped beating. I thought you were gone." I look down at my IV. "I saw Liam." I whisper in a rasp. She shifts her weight on the bed. "He's changed so much. I think he'll finally get to go to Heaven."
I'm a high school senior who loves to read, write, read about writing, and write about reading. My first novel, Heartshire High, is out now!